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Cherish the Illusion

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Long time no see, guys!
I've been and still am very busy but here's my newest work.
I took the photo a few weeks ago at a Meadow in Dresden with Natsuno-Yuuki :)
I hope that you like it!
Image size
4000x6000px 6.77 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D7100
Shutter Speed
1/160 second
Aperture
F/6.3
Focal Length
85 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Oct 31, 2014, 2:50:14 PM
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In the Targeted Commenting section of ProjectComment you asked: "What is your opinion about the edit - is it too much edited? Is the blurring of the Focus very distracting? Please just tell me what my photo makes you think."

As for your edit, I think the color looks fine if that's what you've added to it. The purple brings out the golden color in the plants. (When asking about how an edit changes a photo, maybe include a before picture so we know what you've changed?) Also, in post-processing, make sure that any lines in your picture are straight. You did a good job of that here, but the stem of the plant is tilted just a little and I think it throws off the composure a bit.

The blurred background is not distracting, it's actually quite pleasant and adds to the photo. What is distracting is that the plant in the foreground is not in focus. Make sure you're refocusing every time you move your camera. (Don't worry, I have trouble with that too!)

Over all, it's a nice nature shot and I look forward to seeing you improve! Happy shooting.